Wonder (pathya vat)
sky opens uppeals of thunderchildren wondereyes wide in awedrumbeat dropletsjagged fire drawseach one to pausesquirm in their seatshailstones bouncingroof rattle greetsas storm now meetsend in rainbow
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I much prefer this to your previous one as an example Dana. I hope you don't mind me swapping them. Quando perdiamo la destra essere differenti, perdiamo il privilegio di essere liberi.
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Nia:Terry has added the from the the Oriental area of thepoetsgarret.com -- and a fine explanation of this Cambodian form is available there if you'd like to try it. Lots of fun.Gaer
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I like the way this rhymes Gaer. An interesting form, I think I will be taking a look in the garret, thanks for the link.MaryBTW I love this little engin...
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I'll be doing these forms as a challenge in about three weeks time Mary. Quando perdiamo la destra essere differenti, perdiamo il privilegio di essere liberi.
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Almost an exercise in onomatopoetic verse. Never used that word before, but always wanted to! More descriptive than pure onomatopoeia, but invocative creating a specific desired mood. I'm sure...
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Gaer, A most enjoyable read and style that was a perfect match to your thoughts.Lorraine
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